WALT: use simile and metaphor to make our story more interesting.
My Father
My father is so kind. He is always there for me and he is handsome as a flower. He is a father that is respectful and he is always listening to what we are saying. On father’s day, I can’t give him the world but I can give him all the love I have. He is as tall as the sky tower and he is as intelligent as a scientist. He always teaches me everything and when I am sick he tries to do everything to make me feel better. He is a teacher, a doctor and of course a great father to me. He is as colourful as a rainbow and he is known as Handyman in our family. He is the best father I can ever think of.
4 comments:
Hi I really like your your story it has lots of rhyming words can you teach me how to write like that?
HI Tauaho i like your writing it's nice and neat
Hi Tauaho it sounds like you have a really cool dad. I also really like your writing it is really cool.
Hi Tauaho
I thought that this was a really good fathers day story. I hope you can teach me how to write as good as you ?
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